Sunday, January 20, 2008

A Poem Plus More

I'm a poet. I'll try to write a new poem right now. Here it is:

In an Office Downtown.

He's in a clean, warm room,
picking through papers,
circling things, highlighting
things, typing memos to
co-workers, business associates
and customers on a computer.
There are walls around him.
He feels as though the walls are fine.

Chirping and ocean
waves come from
a little stereo nearby.

OK, that's it. That's the poem. It's not supercalifragilisticexpialidocious, but it's original, and it's mine. I have a lot of poems written in notebooks. I think it's a good idea to transfer them to a computer so if I lose the notebooks, I'll still have the poems.

I wonder what the legal status of stuff on blogs is. Am I an owner of what I write here? I care enough to ask the question, but not enough to go look for an answer. I might want to be an author someday, so I'm curious.

Moving on, the best book I've read in a long time is Sufferings in Africa: The Incredible True Story of a Shipwreck, Enslavement, and Survival on the Sahara by Captain James Riley. It's a personal narrative first published in 1817.

May the force be with you.

4 comments:

The Boid said...

I like it. But I think it would work a little better if you took out the two "things."

And what's up with you being Mr. Anonymous blogger but not allowing anonymous comments?

Can't wait to see what direction your blog takes. May I suggest a slogan? I like, "It's always time somewhere."

telemoonfa said...

I agree with you about taking out the "things".
I don't know how to set the anonymous comment function thing. I'm not good with computers. This is my first blog/ website/ online social networking thing. Maybe I'll figure out how to switch the anonymous thing later.
It's seriously so weird to me that you are a complete stranger and I'm talking with you.
Well, have a nice day.

Anonymous said...

I think putting your poems onto the computer is a wonderful idea telemoonfa. It is important to save them for future telemoonfas to read. I would be whiling to be your personal scribe for a small fee. Think about it …

Rusty said...

"I care enough to ask the question, but not enough to go look for an answer. "

Nice...